Learning Intentions for Science
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Literacy
As part of our rocky shore unit we will also use our literacy skills to read and learn about the rocky shore and to write an information report on a rocky shore creature.
Writing
We are learning to write an information report about an animal.
We are learning to use our writing skills across the curriculum.
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Wednesday 4 April 2018
The Rocky Shore
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Kia ora Mackenzie
ReplyDeleteWell done for writing a recount about our trip and I am glad you enjoyed getting to explore the rock pools and the creatures we saw there. Your writing was well structured and had good spelling and punctuation but you need to start thinking about how to make your work interesting for your reader. In recounts you need to be using interesting descriptive language. We will be working on descriptive writing in Term Two so I will look forward to seeing you push yourself to use a wider range of vocabulary ; )
Kia ora Miss Ireland, thank you for putting a comment on my blog. Next term I will try and use a wider range of vocabulary and more interesting language
ReplyDeleteFrom Mackenzie :)