Thursday 27 October 2016

My Magic Box Poem

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Mackenzie. I like how you included some Te Reo Maori and made it nice and colourful. I also like how you put in lots of pictures. Next time you could add some more onomatopoeia. From Sasha.
































































































































































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    1. Hi Sasha Thank you for the comment
      From Mackenzie :)

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